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作者: 宋震昊    時間: 2022-2-22 12:24
標題: 女詩人贈我詩集。

先是被如此霸氣的書名唬住了,斗起膽子,翻起書頁,發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己喜歡的字句。有一種但丁《神曲》從海潮中歸來的洶涌澎湃。
對聯(lián)是應該追求這種氣勢的,即使掛在城門樓上,也神完氣足。如同世人乍見光武帝,心生贊嘆:“不想在此復見漢官威儀?!?br />
比如胭脂河上天生橋(60頁):
“胭脂涂壁,香艷六朝金粉地;

奇石臥波,醉迷兩岸彩虹橋。”

不能說寫得切,但卻自有一種韻律,就像書名一般,讓人泛起對歷史的遐思。遙想那煙波浩渺之上,胭脂河初通,天生橋殷殷,讓陶宗儀都生出浩嘆之心。若是到了大寒時節(jié),還能見到絳巖晴雪的奇景。

但我更喜歡42頁:

“擠東屋下,

圍灶臺 等糍粑。”

——有一種過年的即視感。
在一方狹小的空間里,都讓人能生出暖意,這就是兒時夢里老家的感覺。史燁往往都生出這樣的情愫,為她的對聯(lián)作品頻頻送力。

正月還沒過去,看她的書,充滿了喜氣。49頁《年味》寫道:“
石磨珍珠吐白玉,油煎丸子泛金紋?!?br /> 不由人不生出共鳴。

略錄數(shù)則,以為道賀!并向溧水人推薦。
記得,開卷有益。
(, 下載次數(shù): 86)
(, 下載次數(shù): 101)
(, 下載次數(shù): 81)

作者: 雷鳴    時間: 2022-2-22 15:23
要是來個書作者簡介就好了。
作者: 健康快樂    時間: 2022-2-22 15:50
快讀快評!點贊!
作者: 臼湖耕夫    時間: 2022-2-22 16:24
祝賀家鄉(xiāng)詩人!
作者: 希夷    時間: 2022-2-22 17:05
也獲一本美女詩人贈書,甚好。

                               
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作者: 宋震昊    時間: 2022-2-22 17:11
健康快樂 發(fā)表于 2022-02-22 15:50
快讀快評!點贊!

感謝點贊。
作者: 不管閑事    時間: 2022-2-22 18:01
祝賀了
作者: 老羊    時間: 2022-2-22 19:34
祝賀,點贊!
作者: 金沙江    時間: 2022-2-22 20:50
我也在讀
作者: 庚丐儈    時間: 2022-2-23 06:02
慢慢欣賞
作者: 宋震昊    時間: 2022-2-23 06:42
First, I was frightened by such a domineering title. I took the courage to turn the pages and found my favorite words and sentences. There is a surge of Dante's Divine Comedy, returning from the tide.

Couplets should pursue this momentum. Even if they are hung on the city gate, they are perfect. Just like when the world first saw Emperor Guangwu, it was filled with admiration: "I am all surprised to see the authority of the Han Dynasty here again."

For example, Tiansheng bridge on the Rouge River (page 60):
"Rouge painted on the wall, fragrant and beautiful, golden powder for Six Dynasties;

Strange stones lie on the waves and get drunk on the rainbow bridge on both sides. "

It can't be said to be written stuck to old stories, but it has its own rhythm, just like the title of the book, which makes people daydream about history. Looking back on the vast expanse of smoke, the Rouge River opened at the beginning, and the Natural Bridge made Tao Zongyi sigh. If it comes to the cold season, you can still see the wonders of crimson rock and clear snow.

But I prefer page 42:

"Under the east house,

Wait by stove for rice crust. "

——There is a sense of instant vision for the Chinese New Year.

In a narrow space, she can produce warmth, which is the feeling of home in their childhood dreams. Shi Ye often gives birth to such feelings and frequently contributes to her couplet works.

The first month hasn't passed yet. Reading her book is full of joy. Page 49 reads:“

Stone pearls spit white jade,

and fried balls are golden. "

I say congratulations! And recommend it to Lishui people.

Remember, it's always good to open a book.
作者: 珍珠港    時間: 2022-2-23 07:06
祝賀樓主。
作者: 飄移的酷神    時間: 2022-2-23 07:08
不錯不錯
作者: 凡……    時間: 2022-2-23 07:25
不錯不錯
作者: 桅子花    時間: 2022-2-23 07:25
路過看看
作者: 小樓一夜    時間: 2022-2-23 07:53
祝賀樓主
作者: 老羊    時間: 2022-2-23 09:07
為女詩人點個贊!
作者: 老漢    時間: 2022-2-23 09:17
溧水才女
作者: 精誠所至    時間: 2022-2-23 10:09
點贊學習
作者: 大漠流沙    時間: 2022-2-23 18:05
點個贊
作者: 大吉大利888    時間: 2022-3-1 15:40
沒想到溧水也出了個有才的女詩人。贊一個。




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